For blogging challenge 4 I could write a story starter for my readers to carry on. So I am going to give you a story starter from my long list and you (my readers) can leave a comment carrying on the story. Remember to read all the comments before you decide what to write! Okay here it is:
The sudden screech of ripping metal, fused with the harsh thundering of the typhoon created and ear-splitting bellow that made my head throb with pain.
Happy Writing!
I look outside, and then I see it. I think it’s going to explode.
Hello Teegan! This is how I think the story should carry on! Here you go –
I sprinted through the frightening storm, with a headache that felt like someone was drilling a hole through my head, and stared in shock at the ruined car that had tipped over behind me.
And if I can carry on from there this is what I’d write –
I had been running to my car so I could get home and snuggle up by the fire, away from the storm, when a deafening screech filled the air. I stopped running, and stared. The car was lying on its back, and the car door had ripped in half. I didn’t know how. But it had happened.
Oooooooh….
I’m not sure if I was meant to carry on after the first sentence, but I did anyway, and I hope you liked it!
Simone 8)
and with sheering fear i turn around to see a cute rabbit